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The First Cut
Contributed by
therazorskiss
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Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 06:46:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The first cut is like ecstasy
Pouring from your veins
The second cut is like danger
Screaming out your name
The third cut is like morphine
It numbs you to the brain
The fourth cut is like heroin
It makes you go insane
And the last cut is the last
And you just look into the past
Yes, the first cut was like ecstasy
But the ecstasy won’t last
Copyright ©
therazorskiss
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2004-05-13 18:46:41]
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Re: The First Cut
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by Juliozgirl on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:03:29 PM AEST
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I love this poem. It flows and the rhyming works. I hope this isn't how your life is, but if it is, I know exactly how you feel!
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Re: The First Cut
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:09:33 PM AEST
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| awesome. you can ryme i cant ryme, but you can ryhme wonderfully |
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Re: The First Cut
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by flat_line on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:01:07 PM AEST
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great write the whole poem flows so nicely and is very creative
--Lauren |
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Re: The First Cut
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by Delusions on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 02:24:34 AM AEST
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| this was a great poem... the last two lines summed it up so well... sent chills down my spine!!!! keep em coming ~Delusions~ |
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Re: The First Cut
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by Bloodthirsty on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 10:46:39 AM AEST
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| wow what a great poem. I first stared cutting a little more than a year ago ago and your poem tells it like it is!!!!!!!! Great job and keep up the good work!!!! |
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Re: The First Cut
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by RebelRose on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 12:54:10 AM AEST
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| That poem is wicked. Cutting is really like that and it is a major endinalne rush. |
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Re: The First Cut
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by kandyklown999 on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 12:57:12 PM AEST
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| This is an gr8 poem! I really like it..and can totally relate to it! |
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