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Someday
Contributed by
Shawn_Radley
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Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 06:25:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When we first spoke, I knew there was something.
Something about you that makes me smile.
Makes my face light up.
Makes me tingle inside.
It is something special.
We learnt to trust,
We learnt to believe,
No matter how big the obstacles that stand in our path,
We will always know one thing.
No-one can change the feelings we share for each other.
But there is one thing that delays our destiny.
Something cruel, and something mean.
Something that upsets us from time to time.
It eats inside. It jerks our tears.
It is Distance.
With you I want to share my life.
I care for you so much,
But I can only tell you so much on a computer.
I want you to know how I feel, to the full extent I can show.
But distance is a harsh thing.
Although it hurts, although it eats at us,
You and I, we know one thing.
It keeps us going, it keeps us sane.
It is the fact that we know, that we will meet, and we will be together.
Someday.
Copyright ©
Shawn_Radley
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2004-05-13 18:25:25]
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Re: Someday
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by lindsaylootoo on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:44:22 PM AEST
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| that was the best long distance relationship poem i have heard yet keep it up coz thats how me and my bf feel right now |
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Re: Someday
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by Whisper on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 01:23:56 AM AEST
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I liked this one very much. The words had feelings in every line
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