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Who am I?
Contributed by
Shawn_Radley
on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:17:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I sit here, alone.
Asking myself "Who am I?"
Over and over,
Round and round in my head.
The possibilities seem endless,
Yet there is only one true answer.
She knows it.
I know it.
It is me.
I try to deny it,
But there is no escape from the reality. It haunts me.
All sanity is gone.
My hands are numb,
As I try to write down,
All I can think, and all that I know.
I can't.
My hand shakes,
And finally comes to a still.
I put it down,
But with too much force,
As it breaks. It is useless.
It is done.
I look at the ink on my hands and I smile,
Knowing that this once could have been blood,
But instead, it is just a poor substitute.
I stare through the mirror and I ask myself...
..."Who am I?"
Copyright ©
Shawn_Radley
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2004-05-13 17:17:58]
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Re: Who am I?
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by honeyrain on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:25:00 PM AEST
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I my goodness.boy, Now you know ya poem was good.I loved it soo much.It was really good.
* i would put my favorite libe but i was feelin all of them :)
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Re: Who am I?
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by XxPerfectlySanexX on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:25:07 PM AEST
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Great poem, I liked the amount of different emotions senced there.
Keep 'em coming.
Much love,
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Re: Who am I?
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by shelby on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:30:51 PM AEST
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thought provoking write here
Michelle |
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Re: Who am I?
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by Shawn_Radley on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:35:46 PM AEST
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| Thanks everybody. I just let my emotions flow. I'll keep them coming. :) |
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Re: Who am I?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:42:30 PM AEST
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| this is good, I cannot wait to read somemore. |
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