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Loving you
Contributed by
honeyrain
on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:00:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'm hurtin, still desiring your love,
Feeling dull with no color,
Like a young white dove.
I'm constently feeling nothing but pain,
Looking for the sun raise,
But finding nothing but rain.
My heart aches wanting to be with you,
Like"Sean Paul"
I want to stick to you "like glue".
I'm hurting badly wanting to kiss those sweet soft lips,
My hands around your neck,
Yours hands sliding down my hips.
But now I let you go, and I want you back,
My heart is off beat,
cause having you is what it now lacks.
Still wanting you day by day,
But it's insane
How I'm loving someone who can neva feel the same way.
Copyright ©
honeyrain
... [
2004-05-13 17:00:44]
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Re: Loving you
(User Rating: 1 )
by XxPerfectlySanexX on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:10:02 PM AEST
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Shes cracked it again!
Another amazing poem, girl where's it all coming from?
Keep the pen going, they're ace!
Love ya lots,
PerfectlySanex |
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Re: Loving you
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by Shawn_Radley on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:21:23 PM AEST
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| A great poem. I sense a lot of emotion. Obviously this was thought out with care. Keep them coming! Be sure to check out "Who am I?" by me. Thanks |
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Re: Loving you
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by NirvanaLotus on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:28:44 PM AEST
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| oooo very pretty! you really captured your feelings so beutifully |
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