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It Was Your Choice
Contributed by
XxPerfectlySanexX
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Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:43:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Watching your lips meet,
Everytime you both greet,
A swelling inside me churns like a grinder,
As she flicks her hair and you kiss her,
Feeling this pain is yet so unreal,
I can't explain everything I feel,
For I would be here for days,
In the end it will always be me who pays,
I tried to give you all you ever wanted, all,
I said to you i'd even take the fall,
The fall for every mistake you made,
Yet you forget me this quick and let me slowly fade,
Her smile so sweet,
Her hair always so neat,
So this is what's known as perfection in your eyes,
Not once did I lie,
Yet her deceiving eyes tell me she will hurt you,
Oh yes you know it's true,
You've given up on us for the last time,
You've done it now pay for your crime,
Don't ask me back,
It's love that you lack,
Good-bye forever,
I hope I see you never.
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Re: It Was Your Choice
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by honeyrain on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:14:58 PM AEST
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girl,u just keep blowin us wit ya powerful poems.and i like the way u dissin ur ex ha.i always love ya poemz.
favorite linez:
You've given up on us for the last time,
You've done it now pay for your crime,
Don't ask me back,
It's love that you lack,
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Re: It Was Your Choice
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by Shawn_Radley on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:39:05 PM AEST
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Amazing.
What I really like about this is that so many people can relate to what you are saying.
Great poem. I look forward to reading more. :)
Shawn x |
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Re: It Was Your Choice
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by NirvanaLotus on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:26:32 PM AEST
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| *whistles* awesome! hehe. i never had to really deal with that situation, i usually dont have marvelous breakups and never dated a person in my school so yeah... The closest thing is when my best friend started dating my X fiance. That was just... So many mixed feelings it was painful to think of |
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Re: It Was Your Choice
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by Juliozgirl on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:29:10 PM AEST
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This is awesome. I'm not much for the whole guy thing, because i've never really had a boyfriend, so I don't know what it really feels like to lose someone you love. You did a good job though!
Much Love,
JuliozGirl |
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