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Sometimes
Contributed by
luckycharm
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Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 02:52:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sometimes I feel so bad,
Because of things people say,
To bring you down,
When you are trying to move on,
Sometimes you get twisted,
And don't know where to hide,
Your feelings become mixed emotions,
Sometimes you begin to lose faith,
But you are scared that your inner self,
May be trying to escape away,
And then thoughts begin to run through your mind,
But sometimes you try to hold back,
Things that you feel are not right,
People start to go against you,
And it feels like your world is dying down,
Sometimes I wish I could change,
But god made me to be me,
I always doubt myself,
Because I think no one will love me,
Sometimes things happen for a reason,
Maybe others look at me different,
But I still remain myself,
Only sometimes
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2004-05-13 14:52:42]
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Re: Sometimes
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 03:42:14 PM AEST
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| Great write i really liked this! Keep up the good work! |
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Re: Sometimes
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by Zaf_Stud on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:04:43 PM AEST
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| It is worth emotions and the emotions are worth value ---- A well brought about piece of work!!!
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Re: Sometimes
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by Remy on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:13:44 PM AEST
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interesting way to put it - feeling sometimes everyday... but reading through, it's something a number of folk can relate to. great write! ;0)
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