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Moving On
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 01:54:53 PM in AEST
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My past has always cast a shadow over me,
Wouldn't leave me alone and let me be,
Would haunt me like a ghost in the night,
Hinder my future and fill me with fright.
I let it get in the way of feeling good about being me,
It kept me a prisoner and I had to get free,
For years it has been a constant war,
I would be the loser, of that I was so sure.
I knew that I had to deal with my past,
I had to do something, my sanity was fading fast,
I felt like a shell of a person,
If I left it any longer, I knew I would worsen.
It took alot of courage to admit I couldn't do it alone,
To ask for help and pick up the phone,
But I am so gald that I asked for assistance,
As my past was incredibly persitant.
It's amazing to think of how far I have come,
To a caring, loving person from one before who was so numb,
I am determined to beat this once and for all,
To break through all of life's brick walls.
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pixie
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Re: Moving On
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by XxPerfectlySanexX on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 02:00:48 PM AEST
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Just what I needed to hear today. After reading that, my emotions just flipped from sad to happiness, thank you very much.
That's actually rather weird because I wrote a poem today named "Moving On" too! Hehe what a crazy world hey.
Take care and keep up the positive writing!
Much love,
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Re: Moving On
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by emystar on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 02:07:28 PM AEST
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Very powerfull, positive write.
Luv that attitude.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Moving On
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by Remy on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:33:17 PM AEST
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keep breaking thruogh those walls... it's worth everything... encouraging write, i liked it... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Moving On
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by lilch4ever on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:40:14 PM AEST
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| I really liked this poem. It was very good and very encouraging. Wonderly written. Keep up the good work :) |
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Re: Moving On
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by Broken_Skin on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 06:08:43 AM AEST
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| for some reason im really scared of something x |
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Re: Moving On
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 02:21:50 PM AEST
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Wow, I loved the wording and flow.
My favorite part:
I am determined to beat this once and for all,
To break through all of life's brick walls.
Very nice
~Kris~ |
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