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If i was still that way
Contributed by
valek
on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 11:28:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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killing the pain, flirting with suicide
stuck in a place where love and hate coincide
desperation sticks to your skin like sweat
wishing i was somewhere else the night we met
battered and bruised with shattered bones
stinging inside my heart like scorpions
lose, regret, remorse, and a million more feelin's
but only feelings in which satan condones
if i was still that way, i would cut myself to see if i still bled
if i could still say, i would kill myself just to get ahead
if i was to leave, who would be the ones to miss me
if my death was concieved, who would give their last kiss to me
sometimes it hurts too much to breath
most times i feels to right to leave
theres no reason anymore for me to grieve
just let me go away, please just let me be
the hate inside my heart is overflowing into my mind
i've tried everything i could, theres nothing else i can find
this hate surrounds my life every second of the day
you can do whatever you want to me, i dont care anyway
i dont regret any of my choices, just the things i havent done
nothing can change the way i am, not even god's lost son
how is it possible for me to hate everyone and everything
and how i hate every little thing my life may bring
ever since i started breathing my life has been torn
wishing all of this was a dream and i'd awake as a newborn
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valek
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2004-05-13 11:28:24]
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Re: If i was still that way
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by DirtyFool on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 11:37:07 AM AEST
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| This is a wonderfull poem. I loved it! I can relate to it. It's very deep and powerfull. This poem is one of the most powerfull poems i have ever heard! |
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Re: If i was still that way
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by bleeding_chains on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 12:26:08 PM AEST
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| this is an excellnt piece of writing. |
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Re: If i was still that way
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 03:09:02 PM AEST
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| amazing write. |
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