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Outdoor phobia
Contributed by
Al_obotomize
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Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:10:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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As I walk through the park
flowers on the ground
the sky's so beautiful
my peace was found
returning of the clouds
laughter amongst children
I think to myself
is my pain at its end
I laugh and I cry
I sigh as I die
my last moment of joy
just went passing by
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Re: Outdoor phobia
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by wray on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 07:52:11 PM AEST
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This is almost like something I would write. (The highest compliment of course since most writers try to write exactly what they think constitutes the best standard of writing.) You captured in brief words the kind of feelings that I always try to express in some long-winded fashion. I know exactly how you feel - the beauty of life, the wanting to be part of it, the turmoil of emotions inside, the longing, sadness, regret that everything will not be OK in the end.
I laugh and I cry
I sigh as I die...
beautiful. |
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Re: Outdoor phobia
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by wray on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 07:54:59 PM AEST
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| Hang on... outdoor phobia?? wth?? let me reread this... lol ;) |
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Re: Outdoor phobia
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by deadbloodyrose on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 05:05:59 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem.. i really liked it.. you have a lot of talent..keep postin ur work i love to read it.. AMI JO |
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