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DreamWeaver
Contributed by
jt
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Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:41:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Standing above in the dark of night
Unearthly fingers probing the mind
Weaving stories into
The fabric of subconscious
To warm or smother at will
Patterns and colours to grow tales of love and lasting friendships
Or to feed the deepest fears hidden within
Working magic in the night
Careful not to wake the sleeping
Rewarding or punishing
All at his mercy
Only to fade with the rising sun to leave unfinished work
To unravel like the threads of a memory
Lost and incomplete
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jt
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2004-05-13 07:41:01]
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Re: DreamWeaver
(User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:55:16 AM AEST
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Very Engrossing with vivid descriptions,
I’m sitting here nodding my head- yep
that’s exactly what it is like. Dreaming!
Your poem also puts into mind my run-away muse-
“Working magic in the night
Careful not to wake the sleeping
Rewarding or punishing
All at his mercy
Only to fade with the rising sun to leave unfinished work
To unravel like the threads of a memory
Lost and incomplete”
Brilliant work, poems don’t get any better than this!
Laurie |
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Re: DreamWeaver
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by bernard on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 08:48:03 AM AEST
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This is an awesom poem very well written and for a change it makes a lot of sense.
bernard. |
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Re: DreamWeaver
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by emystar on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 08:53:50 AM AEST
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I agree, awesome work.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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