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Lightning, Thunder, Rain
Contributed by
face-in-the-crowd
on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 06:19:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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After what happened today
The rain is coming.
Every tear I've ever cried
Is coming down,
So powerful.
A flash of lightning-
The gun shot.
A burst of thunder-
The crash.
And the rain-
The tears,
Streaming down
With no control.
And it keeps playing over in my mind.
Lightning,
Thunder,
Rain.
Lightning,
Thunder,
Rain.
So now I guess
I'm just waiting
For the storm to pass.
Copyright ©
face-in-the-crowd
... [
2004-05-13 06:19:39]
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Re: Lightning, Thunder, Rain
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by Loyalist on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 06:25:34 AM AEST
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| A nice new use of the storm as a metahpor for change. |
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Re: Lightning, Thunder, Rain
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 06:44:29 AM AEST
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Not bad at all. A good catharsis and a write with promise.
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Re: Lightning, Thunder, Rain
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 06:56:01 AM AEST
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| nicely described, thought effecting x |
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Re: Lightning, Thunder, Rain
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by SweetRhythm on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:06:12 AM AEST
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Intresting read, liked it a lot. Quite gripping, nice flow of words, good work!
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Re: Lightning, Thunder, Rain
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by emystar on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:49:19 AM AEST
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Very good write.
This too soon shall pass, (the storm).
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Lightning, Thunder, Rain
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 12:31:28 PM AEST
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i love how you compared and meshed what happened with the storm, vivid, wonderful:) hugs n' love nessa
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