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Answer me Oh Lord!
Contributed by
bhavnas
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Monday, 7th October 2002 @ 09:30:00 PM in AEST
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Come as they ,I dread them come ,
I beg ,I plead ,they make me numb.
Wrinkled I see ,
whom I've seen so fresh and full of youth,
Holding stick I see ,
who taught me to stand and move .
Morning comes ,
I dread the night ,
because one more day , one day less in life.
But that I will go one day too ,
Makes me feel stronger to bid adieu.
To see the origins being uprooted,
I feel defeated , all the more cheated.
Cheated by him ,
who says," they are on this earth ,
'coz with everyone , I cannot be .
They are my reflection ,
in them you see me."
If he is eternal , then why the reflection cannot be ,
Answer my queries ,
I beg oh!Lord to thee.
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2002-10-07 21:30:00]
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Re: Answer me Oh Lord!
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by addie on
Monday, 7th October 2002 @ 11:23:52 PM AEST
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reallly a good write ...somethin every child goes thru ... keep it up...
take care
addie |
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Re: Answer me Oh Lord!
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by bhavnas on
Monday, 7th October 2002 @ 11:35:03 PM AEST
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Hi addie ,
tx for reading the poem n your words of appreciation...it was really a boost....tk care...bhavna. |
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Re: Answer me Oh Lord!
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 8th October 2002 @ 03:48:41 AM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc, bhavnas... This is an excellent piece... words to ponder!!
Looing forward to reading more..
Jenni |
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Re: Answer me Oh Lord!
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by bhavnas on
Tuesday, 8th October 2002 @ 09:46:20 AM AEST
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hi jenni ,
thankyou so much for ur words of appreciation and the sweet gesture of welcoming the new entry...that's me !!!!!...u know how appreciation works for any creative piece...i shall soon paste more n would love to hear from u...tk care...bhavna. |
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Re: Answer me Oh Lord!
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by venkat on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 01:23:07 AM AEST
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| A very good piece.. venkat |
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