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You can't give a title to rage and extreme sadness.
Contributed by
BinkCaesar
on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 02:23:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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now ive gotten myself mad!!
not the thing to do.
i hate him i hate him i hate him
soon i will hate you.
just mind my own business
all would be ok
but i must know
and now i know too much to stay away
entrapped in your web but do i really wanna go?
Hell yea i do, but if you ask, i'll say no.
argh....nothing i can do
why oh why did it have to be you?
are you doing this on purpose? I think that you are.
no matter what, i realize that this has gone too far
[insert curse word here] both of you leave me alone
no one needed me after all, so i shall sit here and moan.
moan and complain until the very end,
cause thats when i'll realize that you were never really my friend...
--END
I give up. I found out what i shouldn't have, but knew already in the back of my mind. Leave me alone for a while. Everyone. Especially those I love. I won't be the same, but i'll tell you when im "sane."
Hahaha i was never really needed after all. I should have known. And no one ask me if i'm ok. I'm not ok!!
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2004-05-13 02:23:13]
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Re: You can't give a title to rage and extreme sadness.
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 03:32:10 AM AEST
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Ok, you made a clear point hear! Strong words.
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Re: You can't give a title to rage and extreme sadness.
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by loopylou on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:19:50 AM AEST
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| i like this. you expressed your dark feelings well by the way it was almost raving and the flow was frantic. very good |
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Re: You can't give a title to rage and extreme sadness.
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by loopylou on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:20:06 AM AEST
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| i like this. you expressed your dark feelings well by the way it was almost raving and the flow was frantic. very good |
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Re: You can't give a title to rage and extreme sadness.
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by loopylou on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:20:36 AM AEST
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| i like this. you expressed your dark feelings well by the way it was almost raving and the flow was frantic. very good |
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