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Snakes and Trees
Contributed by
SeanMcHaney
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Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 01:39:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Demons lick their fingers,
As they run them through my hair,
The feeling of dread lingers,
As I drive on with out a care.
And still the snake waits underneath the trees.
Twisting and turning in my view,
Devils tearing at the center of my heart,
Forgetting that it is me they slew,
They torturer me from the start.
And still the snake waits underneath the trees.
I see her in her window,
So young so sweat,
I wonder if she will ever know,
That I will end her hearts beat?
And still the snake waits underneath the trees.
Sudden Death is injected in my veins,
She will not die before me,
I do not make it to the lanes,
All because the snake waits underneath the trees.
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SeanMcHaney
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2004-05-13 01:39:50]
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Re: Snakes and Trees
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 01:51:56 AM AEST
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| this is pretty good Bro, keep it up. |
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Re: Snakes and Trees
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by venkat on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 01:57:11 AM AEST
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| A good write..venkat |
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Re: Snakes and Trees
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 02:23:16 AM AEST
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Dark, cruel and chilling. I like it.
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: Snakes and Trees
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by loopylou on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:32:23 AM AEST
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| this is very diffrent i like the uniquness keep it up!! |
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Re: Snakes and Trees
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by Archie on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 03:46:40 PM AEST
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| This is a good poem. |
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