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the world i dont conform
Contributed by
SocialMisfit
on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 11:52:37 PM in AEST
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let me be free
let me loose from the shackles of conformity
let me choose what i want to be
i got the right
to be who i want to be
why you keep trying
to hold me here
then keep me back
to shut me down
i cannot be a part to a society that doesn't care
i will not be a slave to a god that doesn't exist
i will not conform
if i wanted
i could be like you
but
i'd rather eat ****
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Re: the world i dont conform
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by Freakazoid on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 12:03:49 AM AEST
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| forget the the spelling man its true noone will ever let you goyour traped forever in an enternal bind between everything |
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Re: the world i dont conform
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 12:37:52 AM AEST
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you know, i really like your poem, its well done, although i do believe it may be possible that you might use another verb and noun, lol, when i started writing i was told by a friend of mine, harley hann, ~well known writer of pc books, that if i wanted to say something in a more meaningful way, look for a better word and i would reach more people and touch more hearts, just a thought, keep writing, hugs n' love nessa
p.s. i dont care much for the civilized world anymore myself so i live on a mountain in a forest:) |
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Re: the world i dont conform
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 12:41:51 AM AEST
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| excuse me, thats when i *started writing publicly* lol, hugs nessa |
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