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Urge
Contributed by
Delusions
on
Monday, 7th October 2002 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
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The Urge is too strong,
The pain is too deep,
I surcumb to it's power
And dig the blade in.
I twist it around,
As the tip hits my soul
And i feel my release,
Pain is my goal.
But as the cuts begin to scar
And never fade away.
I look at me,
At the 'art' on my body,
And once again,
I feel the hate begin to surge,
Deep down,
Where only I know of the power,
The thoughts,
The feelings.
Pain is my release,
Though I want it to stop,
But its too hard,
The Urge still drives me on....
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Delusions
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2002-10-07 21:00:00]
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Re: Urge
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by SA_RA on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 10:54:15 AM AEST
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| nothing to worry about...the worse things are when you stocked and can't drives you on....:) |
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Re: Urge
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by Sonibe on
Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 12:40:51 AM AEST
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| ....I like this one a lot, the feel of pain can be addictive....keep up the good work.... |
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Re: Urge
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by Broken_Skin on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 07:08:21 AM AEST
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if im guessing right..... forgive me if im wrong, is it something to do with cutting yourself, i do that, its not a good thing but i cant help it, i get the urge......
xxx |
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Re: Urge
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by LayDownPlayDead on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 09:09:28 PM AEST
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| This was very well written, The pain is so addictive...the only way to feel released and to make yourself feel better...Good write. |
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Re: Urge
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by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 12:31:34 PM AEST
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| very good...i know exactly how you feel... |
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Re: Urge
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by unforgiven on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 03:15:31 AM AEST
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the pain in cutting is so addictive it's always hard to stop and when u do...there r always the scars there everyday to remind urself of what u used to do and the lowest point in ur life.
luv u sweety and will always look out for u and kick neone that upsets u!! haha
becca |
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