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wise old woman of light
Contributed by
shorty_52
on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 10:10:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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'wise old woman
of the younder light
give me the power
of eternal light.'
'so when i am old and grey
like you
i'll always have the power
to know what to do.'
'and when i look
into their eyes
i'll know the truth
behind all lies.'
'i know the consiquenses
of what i ask
just grant me this wish
of that i ask.'
then one word
she said at last
was 'yes' and then
i sighed at last.
it felt so strainge
to see the past
to see the future
the present at last.
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Re: wise old woman of light
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 10:18:49 PM AEST
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Good thoughts. Life and its spirits will take you where you want to go if you are true in your heart and soul. Always look for enlightenment and search for truth. It cannot evade you.
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Re: wise old woman of light
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 10:30:37 PM AEST
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Oh..I loved this.. Not sure of your style..haven't read enough of your porms, I don't think..but that will be remedied soon..
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Re: wise old woman of light
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by thumper on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 10:55:39 PM AEST
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| I liked this! It would be nice to be all-seeing and all-knowing. Thankyou for the smile ; 0 ) Thumps |
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Re: wise old woman of light
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by AnGeL_M on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:50:11 PM AEST
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Wow I Love This One !!!!!!! Its Really Good ....
Totally Awesome Write :-) Keep Em Coming
********LoVe**AnGeL**********
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