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Nature's Way
Contributed by
thumper
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Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 10:03:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The skies, they are a'darkenin'
A storm's about to break!
There's a need to scurry back
Inside, for Goodness Sake!
All God's creatures great and small
Have sensed this all along
They've hunkered down inside their homes
To weather out the storm
Oh no! The storm's a startin'
The wind is blowin' strong
The lightenin' is a'crackin'
And the rains a'peltin' down
The rains came down, the winds they howled
The lightenin' flashed and flickered
The storm it made a big 'ol noise
It made my heart beat quicker
It's over now, the sun's come out
The world looks sharp and bright
This is Mother Nature's way
Of setting her house right!
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thumper
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2004-05-12 22:03:05]
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Re: Nature's Way
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 10:21:01 PM AEST
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this is excellent, i just love your style:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Nature's Way
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 10:22:35 PM AEST
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Interesting and quite novel style. Mother Nature cleaning house. I like that idea. Wonder if that is what happens in the spring when we get all the showers. Maybe that is where the term 'spring cleaning' came from? I truly enjoyed this write.
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Re: Nature's Way
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by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 10:48:25 PM AEST
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Awww, this is a nice one. Made me smile :). Great flow to it, the type that sounds great aloud, and with a certain pleasant, quaint quality to it . . . well done.
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Re: Nature's Way
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by venkat on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 01:02:38 AM AEST
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| Aww sweet mother nature..welldone. venkat |
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Re: Nature's Way
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 11:13:06 PM AEST
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Wow...the imagery here is just superb!! Great write.... I love it
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Re: Nature's Way
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by BlackFire9786 on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:24:46 AM AEST
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wow, i love it, the imagery is awesome...i like the way you said a'darkenn and a'startin...gave it a lighter feel...very interesting read, i like it a lot, i'll be reading more of your stuff...great job!
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