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You don't love me
Contributed by
pyrochick
on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 09:55:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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i lie awake at night
your voice not leaving me
how can i love you so much
if you can never see me
i'm almost over you
i stopped crying in the night
you're almost almost out of my head
i stopped trying to stay in bed
do you think of me
as much as i think of you
sometimes i think you're next to me
but it's just me missing you
i never loved someone
as much as you
now i see
you don't love me
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2004-05-12 21:55:13]
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Re: You don't love me
(User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 09:58:29 PM AEST
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Short, simple, sweet, to the point . . . and powerfully emotional. You've captured that emotion perfectly.
"i'm almost over you
i stopped crying in the night
you're almost almost out of my head"-- wonderfully said.
--Nora |
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Re: You don't love me
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by Loveligirl92 on
Friday, 29th October 2010 @ 02:32:57 AM AEST
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| This is a great poem, emotional and strong, I can really feel it. Very beautiful! |
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