|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Going Home
Contributed by
JadedExistence
on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 09:17:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
Arising from her watery grave
Going in search of what she craves
Watching from the shadows as a child walks by
She descends on him with a joyful cry
Blood flowing past her lips
As into his tender skin she rips
Gazing upon his body she sees her new child
Looked down on his opening eyes and smiled
He awakes on the cold, wet ground
And looks upon his eternal playground
Through the darkness they do roam
Searching out more for them to bring home
Copyright ©
JadedExistence
... [
2004-05-12 21:17:35]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Going Home
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 09:21:04 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Ewwwwww, alright people. we need to talk. Do yuu vampires and wicked evil people have to pick on the defenseless little kids? Was probably going to the store for his mommie. Shame on you all!! Good write tho.
Rita |
|
|
Re: Going Home
(User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 09:26:42 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Not bad, not bad at all . . . nice and chilling and creepy :D.
Seemed rather like something Arden would write . ..
-Nora |
|
|
Re: Going Home
(User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 11:11:19 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Chilling and goooood! Reminds me of "Interview with a Vampire".Good flow. Totally enjoyed this. Thumps ; 0 ) |
|
|
Re: Going Home
(User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:32:00 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
very good. I loved the descending on him with a joyful cry brought lots of disturbing imagery to my head. All around an amazing poem.
Bobo (Joel) |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
