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Going Home

Contributed by JadedExistence on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 09:17:35 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Arising from her watery grave
Going in search of what she craves

Watching from the shadows as a child walks by
She descends on him with a joyful cry

Blood flowing past her lips
As into his tender skin she rips

Gazing upon his body she sees her new child
Looked down on his opening eyes and smiled

He awakes on the cold, wet ground
And looks upon his eternal playground

Through the darkness they do roam
Searching out more for them to bring home




Copyright © JadedExistence ... [ 2004-05-12 21:17:35]
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Re: Going Home (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 09:21:04 PM AEST
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Ewwwwww, alright people. we need to talk. Do yuu vampires and wicked evil people have to pick on the defenseless little kids? Was probably going to the store for his mommie. Shame on you all!! Good write tho.

Rita


Re: Going Home (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 09:26:42 PM AEST
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Not bad, not bad at all . . . nice and chilling and creepy :D.

Seemed rather like something Arden would write . ..

-Nora


Re: Going Home (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 11:11:19 PM AEST
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Chilling and goooood! Reminds me of "Interview with a Vampire".Good flow. Totally enjoyed this. Thumps ; 0 )


Re: Going Home (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:32:00 PM AEST
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very good. I loved the descending on him with a joyful cry brought lots of disturbing imagery to my head. All around an amazing poem.

Bobo (Joel)




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