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I_I Pictures I_I
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:20:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Pictures on the wall
hanging by a little thread
memories of you.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Feb.28/2003
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-05-12 20:20:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I_I Pictures I_I
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:30:35 PM AEST (User
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short yet moving. I understand completly. |
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Re: I_I Pictures I_I
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:30:43 PM AEST (User
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Excellent, Cynthia, excellent. I love this, absolutely love it.
Rita |
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Re: I_I Pictures I_I
(User Rating: 1 ) by blueheart on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:36:24 PM AEST (User
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You dont need many words to explain your emotions. Good write. |
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Re: I_I Pictures I_I
(User Rating: 1 ) by Reptilacis on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:39:12 PM AEST (User
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nice |
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Re: I_I Pictures I_I
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:55:30 PM AEST (User
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brilliant! hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: I_I Pictures I_I
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 09:18:16 PM AEST (User
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Sigh.... Beautiful haiku, my friend....
Takes me back a bit...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: I_I Pictures I_I
(User Rating: 1 ) by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 09:54:45 PM AEST (User
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*smiles*
One of the things I love about poetry is that big words, dozens of stanzas, internal rhymes, etc., do not a poem make. You remind me of that with this pretty haiku, emotive enough to call forth feelings of wistfulness, yearning for times long past, and a vague sort of peacefulness in just twelve simple words.
Well done, and my thanks for the reminder :).
--Nora |
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Re: I_I Pictures I_I
(User Rating: 1 ) by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 10:04:25 PM AEST (User
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SHORT & SWEET BUT WORTH EVERY SINGLE HEARTBEAT!
LOL-DAN!! |
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Re: I_I Pictures I_I
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 12:06:34 AM AEST (User
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very nice..venkat |
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Re: I_I Pictures I_I
(User Rating: 1 ) by AnGeL_M on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:46:55 PM AEST (User
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This Is Wonderful ....Love It !!!!! Well Written :-) Love You Sis !!!!!!
*******LoVe**AnGeL*********
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Re: I_I Pictures I_I
(User Rating: 1 ) by JennyFruFru on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:40:48 PM AEST (User
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ur haikus are so adorable... i love em to pieces |
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