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The need for a hit
Contributed by
lil_angel
on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:26:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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The cages that you have locked yourself into
Am I too be trapped in them to?
Will I be able to get free?
You are trapped in so many
Can you see your way out?
Can you tell me tell me that we will get free?
Or are we to be trapped forever
Freedom tasted so good
Why did I let it go?
I NEED A HIT
More cages to many
I am pulling out my hair
Screaming but you are too trapped to hear me.
Then i see in my heart i AM free.
The cages are put on me by others
GIVE ME AN OTHER HIT!
May 6th, 2004
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2004-05-12 17:26:53]
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Re: The need for a hit
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by XxPerfectlySanexX on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:30:24 PM AEST
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Nice one.
Lovin' all your poems,
Keep up the amazing heart touching poems!'
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Re: The need for a hit
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by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:31:48 PM AEST
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Wow, Cece . . . well, I already told you (or at least I think I did . . . did I?) that I found this one to be raw, emotional . . . and therefore exactly what poetry is supposed to be :). I guess it WAS a bit surprising but really really good . . . kudos.
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