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My prize
Contributed by
honeyrain
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Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 04:36:27 PM in AEST
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The pen is my only weapon to release my rage.
Writing words that hold in pain, I got too much going on to be this age.
Holding deep dark secrets I've never told before.
The fakers, the haters, liars, degraders, I feel like I'm fighting in a war.
Crying from the wounds that people left me, its like I'm crying tears of blood.
Letting people treat me bad, I let them walk over me like a rug.
Putting on fake smiles to cover how I feel.
Just looking into my eyes you can see the pain is real.
If you look deeper you'll see old memories and forgotten dreams.
But i wear contacts, so I'm happy, everything is good, it may seem.
I can't stop putting on makeup to coverup the baggy eyes.
Because these problems keep coming, I'm running a race, and a heartbreak pain is my prize.
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2004-05-12 16:36:27]
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Re: My prize
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by vampyrekiss on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 04:41:30 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem I can truely re-late keep writing and if the people at the other site said this was bad well F**K THEM hehe
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Re: My prize
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by XxPerfectlySanexX on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:04:43 PM AEST
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Firstly - Thanks for your lovely comments you've left on a couple of my poems, much appriciated.
Secondly - This poem is absolutly amazing. I really like it, I can relate to it when I was bullied a year ago through school. And I can just relate to it in general about how I feel about life sometimes. You've got a talent, being able to capture the true emotions is great!
Keep writing, good luck for the future.
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Re: My prize
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:15:01 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings, you have talent, puh to those other ppl, keep posting and writing, and warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa
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