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Doing Time
Contributed by
juliette
on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 04:16:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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There is an empty place in me,
Where you used to be.
A space you filled with love and lies
And since you left I am doing time.
Time awake without the dreams,
We had planned out so perfectly.
Time alone to look back on,
All the things we did wrong.
Time to sit here in the morning light
Wonder how I will make it through tonight.
Time to face the parts of me I need to change,
To feel every stabbing portion of this pain.
Time to dream you will have me back
Dwell on all the good times that we had.
I am doing time, with my memories of you
Holding onto what has come unglued
Remembering every single moment with you
Doing time, what else can I do?
Copyright ©
juliette
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2004-05-12 16:16:03]
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Re: Doing Time
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 04:24:24 PM AEST
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| This is really good! You shouldnt doubt yourself! |
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Re: Doing Time
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 06:08:58 PM AEST
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| u touched on something that i really feel at the moment, and im literally sitting here in tears, a poem that can do that to sumone has gotta be good, so good job : ) ive bin feeling like that for so long, and am now having to hide it to make my ex and his gf feel happy, but i gess its something we all have to deal with at one time or the other. i dunno if ur still feeling this way or watever, but if u ever need to chat, feel free to send me a message : ) keep writing. sooze xxx |
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Re: Doing Time
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by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 10:18:26 AM AEST
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people true feeling will never bore i liek the way you just tell what you feel and once again thank you for this poem and al the others xgripx
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