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The Third Wheel
Contributed by
GoodVillain
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Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 03:50:36 PM in AEST
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I stepped in his room where he laid sleeping
This wouldnt happen if she liked me more
Now Ill destroy him leaving her weeping
This has always been bothering me to my core
I tapped him gently with the small blade
He woke up almost dead
I continued with the plan I made
His bed was now the color red
She will never understand why I did this
But its the only way I can live
How many others will she have to miss
I will always be administrative
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2004-05-12 15:50:36]
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Re: The Third Wheel
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 03:54:14 PM AEST
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| Very well stated! |
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Re: The Third Wheel
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by PsychoticDreamz on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 09:15:45 PM AEST
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Funny story..My friends and I have had a follower before..and we confronted her that we didnt like her doing that and called her a third wheel...made her cry..but she nearly got us in serious trouble at the time so ...anyways..nice poem lol
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Re: The Third Wheel
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by moon_light on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 06:33:35 PM AEST
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| thisis a sad poam. coseing a loved one pain will not make them love you. it will cose unforgivebull pain. and you will live still with out thare love. |
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