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raped
Contributed by
spider
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Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 03:26:19 PM in AEST
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I hope one day I
can forget the way you pushed
me down and raped me
Copyright ©
spider
... [
2004-05-12 15:26:19]
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Re: raped
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 04:00:05 PM AEST
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Yes Very Powerful Spider !!!!!! Written Well
Keep Em Coming :-)
******LoVe**AnGeL*******
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Re: raped
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by XxPerfectlySanexX on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:35:27 PM AEST
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I agree with the others, Powerful.
It's amazing how some poetry takes lines and lines to be powerful. Yet this is what, 3 lines? And hit's you as hard as a rock.
Nice,
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Re: raped
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 05:54:17 PM AEST
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| well, this was erm, shocking. wasnt expecting you to ome out with it so plain i guess. Very thought provoking x (i hope it isnt true) |
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