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Numb
Contributed by
StoneAngel
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Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 01:51:44 PM in AEST
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Without a trace it disappears
Searching for it everywhere
Pinch my skin to no avail
The feelings gone
I feel so numb
I feel like crying
But feel so numb
No feeling in my feet or limbs
Were have my feelings gone
I want them back
I search and search
but with no avail
I cannot find them
Nothing I do, nothing I say
can bring them back
It's so confusing
It's so sad
I sit in the corner
Waiting for someone
To give me a hand
No one comes
To take my hand
In a crowded room I stand
Feeling numb all over
Feeling alone and depressed
I wish I could cry or lash out
but all I feel is numb inside
I sit in the corner
Waiting for someone
To give me a hand
No one comes
To take my hand
I sit in the corner
Wondering were my knight is
I've search high and low
But cannot find him
I feel so numb inside
From my head to my toes
I scream inside to feel something
I yearn for it and search for it
I've been through a lot
And a lot more I'll go through
There's so many fakes
I can't tell the difference
I wish I could find my knight in shinning armour
I feel so numb inside
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Re: Numb
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 02:46:29 PM AEST
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| This was really good i really enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing it with us! |
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Re: Numb
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by crying_loneliness on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 03:40:16 PM AEST
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| This is really good...And I know how you feel. This poem was really well written, great job! |
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Re: Numb
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:40:45 PM AEST
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whoa... i felt completely numb for about a year... then i brought back my feelings (alot, not all) and its really cool cause now i can slip in and out of them when i want
you're poem is so honest. good job |
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Re: Numb
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 06:51:31 PM AEST
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Wow! Awesome write Laina... this rocks.
Don't worry you'll find your knight! :) |
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Re: Numb
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by Black13 on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:15:55 AM AEST
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This echoes to me the same feelings I get when I listen to linkin park's numb.
Excellent write.
Very nicely done.
I agree with Daniela. :) |
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