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Mystical moments
Contributed by
broken-glass
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Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 01:45:39 PM in AEST
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Right here is where I'm standing,
this life is so demanding,
submit those fictional feelings
disposable truths
and honest lies
handful of pain, regret, goodbyes.
But to move way from yesterday,
what a wonderful thought.
This is reflected by my mystical moments..
with you.....
With you I'm not a woman,
with you I'm not a man.
With you I'm always silly,
just because I can.
You see that I'm pretense,
you never have to ask.
You see what I allow no one else,
you see I wear a mask.
You see I'm irresponcible,
you see that I am weak,
you see that I'm a liar, a traitor and a freak.
But I don't question this,
your ability to see,
the internal side of who I am,
and love me just for me.
You see when I am angry,
scratching out your eyes...
you see what I see in myself,
all that I despise.
It doesn't matter what the world wants to see,
I'm just blessed and happy eternally,
that someone could love me
for me.
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Re: Mystical moments
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by kailadragon on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 01:50:04 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem. I think everyone just wants to be loved for who they are |
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Re: Mystical moments
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by StoneAngel on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 02:04:48 PM AEST
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| What a great poem keep it up/ |
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Re: Mystical moments
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by dolly_dagger on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 04:19:01 PM AEST
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lol! they weren't ALL fictional. Nice writing. Definitely describes the atmosphere right now.
love u loads
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Re: Mystical moments
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by little_genna on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 05:42:24 AM AEST
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wow i love your poetry as you say you love mine. well you have now seen the little genna side of me. she's kinda wild huh! good write!
love and hugs
XgenX |
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Re: Mystical moments
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by chanceof_promise on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 11:03:23 PM AEST
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i like this one a lot..
i havent really been love for who i am yet..i have gotten close but then the guy always freaks out about a commentiment (sp) and backs away..so havent found it yet..
but i love the poem..i like your use of words..they take me somewhere else when i read it..and i like that feeling.. |
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