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A True Story

Contributed by Cursed_Witch on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 12:51:24 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



U boys, were twins,
Us girls, were best friends,
We were all in love.
I hated u & loved the other,
U hated me & loved my friend,
But we still made great couples.

One night, we were all out,
Me and u had a fight,
U took off with her,
And I wished u died.

Then later that night,
Came the news,
U & her were gone in an accident,
Your brother blamed me,
So did everyone,
Now I lost all 3 of u,
And it’s all my fault.
You never even gave me a chance
To say I’m sorry.




Copyright © Cursed_Witch ... [ 2004-05-12 12:51:24]
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Re: A True Story (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 01:04:55 PM AEST
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wow powerful, and hon it anit your fault!


Re: A True Story (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 01:19:41 PM AEST
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You know, we all do and say things out of anger and hurt that we regret later. But you saying those words did not cause that accident. I am very sorry that it happened that way, but it is not your fault.

Rita


Re: A True Story (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 01:21:22 PM AEST
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i am so sorry for you loss, but you cannot blame yourself. you didnt cause them to have an accident. this is not your fault. look, if you need anyone to talk to let me know.

i hope you are ok,

phil xxx


Re: A True Story (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 01:23:54 PM AEST
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ohh very sad, life is so precarious, hugs n' love nessa

@->>->-


Re: A True Story (User Rating: 1 )
by Reptilacis on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 01:28:22 PM AEST
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wow. i know how u feel. just remember there is always someone there to talk 2 u. ill be more then happy 2 help u. its what im best at.


Re: A True Story (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 03:02:18 PM AEST
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Re: A True Story (User Rating: 1)
by kailadragon on Wednesday, May 12 2004 @ 13:21:44 CDT
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Wow, i'm so sorry for your loss. REemember, be careful what you wish for, you never know what will happen. Great poem tho. keep, em comin


Re: A True Story (User Rating: 1 )
by crying_loneliness on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 03:48:23 PM AEST
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This is a really good poem..and it's so sad! T_T BUT you did really really well. *hugs* And honey don't worry...it wasn't your fault.


Re: A True Story (User Rating: 1 )
by crying_loneliness on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 03:49:19 PM AEST
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This is a really good poem..and it's so sad! T_T BUT you did really really well. *hugs* And honey don't worry...it wasn't your fault.


Re: A True Story (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 09:23:28 PM AEST
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If someone died just because someone else wished it- not of us would be here probably. That sounds a bit... I don't know... unfeeling the way I've said it... but... really it's just a simple truth.

Thank you for sharing this. It was nicely crafted... concise. You didn't need to include many words to express your emotions - the ending speaks volumes. It is heartwrenching. I am so sorry for your loss and sorry that it left you feeling guilty. I hope you find a way to let it go - no matter what you said, it wouldn't have changed anything. If "everyone" blames you... it's probably only because they are hurt and have no other answer to console them.

Take care of yourself


Re: A True Story (User Rating: 1 )
by willow_tara72002 on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 06:43:47 PM AEST
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Awwww,. This was sad. but well written. I hope you overcome the blame, because it wanst your fault,.


Re: A True Story (User Rating: 1 )
by saphfyre on Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 07:00:56 PM AEST
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God, I cant believe this happened to you... and no, it is so NOT your fault. When people are lost, we do blame ourselves at first though. I'm glad you have gotten past that. We all wish things like that... I have wished people dead or me to be dead to hurt someone else many times. And we all wish we could have said something at the end to someone who is gone. Its so far beyond what we can do, and no one is responsible...I need to tell you one that my sis told me about the guilt of it.




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