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Suicide Note.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 12:46:43 PM in AEST
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At least I know where I stand now.
You’ve destroyed me inside, and broken my walls.
Shadowed my face, with your b**** calls.
Pushed me away with no one at all.
Jaz, I’m sorry, but you don’t understand me.
If I don’t cut, I get blocked my misery.
I ain’t been bullied,
Like as bad as you.
But it doesn’t make it better.
When I get hurt more than you.
My life is pretty mucked!
So don’t hang on to me.
Because it won’t be fair,
When I die, eventually.
I built a friendship,
With them from trust.
It was some thing you said to do.
I feel it’s crumbled into dust.
Maybe I’m wrong.
And maybe it still lives.
But why should I live on broken walls,
If there’s nothing left to give!??
So I hope some one, shows you this note.
After, they find me dead.
I’m sorry jaz. But it’s not fair on you.
Things are so twisted inside my head!
I can’t keep things together.
What I try with, breaks.
Until I’m left with nothing and no one.
So I’m going, before I reach that state!
Copyright ©
deathdrop
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2004-05-12 12:46:43]
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Re: Suicide Note.
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 01:03:28 PM AEST
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| wow power***** write very well done! |
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Re: Suicide Note.
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 01:24:40 PM AEST
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i've been here, please before you do anything talk to someone. if you need me i am here, i have been through this.
if you want to talk, pm me.
*hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: Suicide Note.
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by Reptilacis on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 01:34:02 PM AEST
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| lol ur almost as crazy as me. just that when u try and run away i bet u dont try 2 blow up the school. vary good though. u can talk 2 me if u want 2 know on my attemps. |
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Re: Suicide Note.
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by Broken_Skin on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 04:03:51 PM AEST
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| well, what can i say.. what does one suicidal say to the other lol dont do it? as if... that'd be silly, i can say not yet though :) dont do it yet, keep writing x |
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Re: Suicide Note.
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 12:10:32 AM AEST
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Please dear friend, think about this very seriously.......when you are dead......it's the end. Think of all the good things you leave behind.........Please get help if only you could find.
Scary write to me.
love you
consue |
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