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The forked road
Contributed by
Mihiri
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Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 11:19:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A fusion of emotions, I know not which holds the reins,
Is it of truth that mixed feelings do last?
Perplexity dons the crowning hat until I finally decide,
But, by then would my feelings have passed?
Intermingling and entwining is how my sentiments pass time,
Lay one finger on the chosen, I simply cannot,
E’en though I may discern what I feel to be unfeigned,
‘tis but a moment and I’ve already forgot
The impressions that surround me are of no worth to me,
They rub vinegar and salt in my wound,
For they alone hold the responsibility of all guile,
As they transform my mind into a living tomb
Nay, I withhold and stand fast to my ground,
As they poke and prod at my mind,
I then question myself as to what I sincerely feel,
Yet, a firm directive I cannot find
To be courageous and love or to obey and decline?
‘tis a ruling I cannot pretend and decide,
So, I clasp my hands and try to retain whatever that I feel,
Hoping that by it my indecision it may hide
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Mihiri
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Re: The forked road
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by movax on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 11:30:30 AM AEST
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| Crikey! I hope you get out of this position you are in in your life. It doesn't sound good, but hey I've been through the mill myself and can identify with some of what you wrote. Hope it gets better. Good luck |
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Re: The forked road
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by wray on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 08:32:24 PM AEST
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| You've got a way of packing every word with heavy meaning. If I'm not imagining things, you've described your situation well. This is something I'll have to read over again a few hundred times to understand it though... reminds me of school ;) |
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