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misty morning
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 11:17:41 AM in AEST
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the mist rolls in
on little dove wings
becoming thicker; overlooking
barn, treelines, mountain horizen
bringing subtle gentle cooing songs
to float along sky of morning doves
whilst nature sings
on silent haunches
wild things roam, frogs speak
one rabbit makes a hasty retreat
for this misty forest is their home
many times this mist she has seen
as into flowing river
drinking deer leans
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Re: misty morning
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by spooky on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 11:38:04 AM AEST
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beautful misty mornings,,i could sit and watch it all day if it were possible,,to see the aminals play,joyfuly,,as the mornng mist lays apon them,
well written,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 11:40:45 AM AEST
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And doesn't it make the day start off just perfectly. I love looking down toward the pond and seeing the animals drinking and the little ones playing. Right now you can't even walk outside because we have millions of 1/2 baby frogs everywhere. They are adorable. This is a beautiful piece of heaven, Nessa.
Rita |
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by arden on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 11:42:51 AM AEST
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oh what beautiful stunning imagery, you do imagery best. i loved this poem. perfectly done, flawless.
well done.
Arden |
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Re: misty morning
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 12:02:59 PM AEST
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what a beautiful peaceful picture you have painted
Shari |
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 12:08:05 PM AEST
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Congratulations on a wonderful nature poem. I caught the serenity and naturalness in this poem, Beautiful
bernard. |
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Re: misty morning
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 12:30:45 PM AEST
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What a beautiful nature poem .
I love it,
Thank you for sharing that with us. :) |
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Re: misty morning
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 02:48:40 PM AEST
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ahhh, mom..... for a moment I was transported back to the wilderness of the mountains in my youth... Thank you for that....
xoxo Jaime |
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by Putteragain on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 03:09:03 PM AEST
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oh nessa this was so beautiful
HUGS((( )))
michelle |
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Re: misty morning
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 03:56:21 PM AEST
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| This picture of your mountain home sounds so beautiful and serene Nessa ... love this write ... hugs Jan |
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Re: misty morning
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by twinkletoes on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:04:22 PM AEST
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DW beat me to it! Yes this is a very nice place, thanks for sharing.
tt |
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Re: misty morning
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by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:42:26 PM AEST
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Awwwwww, Nessa, this is gorgeous *smiles*. As vivid imagery as ever and I swear I could just about see that deer . . . the whole poem sounds very like Carl Sandburg's "Fog" (a good thing)-- ever read it? :)
--Nora |
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Re: misty morning
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:51:22 PM AEST
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| hiya nora, no im not familiar with that poem but i am going to look it up, thankies:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: misty morning
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:58:44 PM AEST
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| Nessa, this was stunningly beautiful. I had the big picture in my mind. Nice work. *S* Cynthia |
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:59:41 PM AEST
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| Its hardly ever misty over here but you made it seem as if it is. Great imagery, seems to be your strong point. Calm and serenading. :) |
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by Merry on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 09:07:02 PM AEST
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oh nessa - I can see it and feel it in your words, the misty morning - such a peacful awakening to the new day - I love to hear the birds first thing in the morning, especially the doves. What a wonderful write,,,,,bravo sis
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 11:14:14 PM AEST
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A MISTY DEW ONE OF LIFES GREAT THINGS AMONG THE FEW! PRETTY & ENLIGHTENING!! GREAT JOB!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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by venkat on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 12:21:24 AM AEST
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| well done..you have nicely brought a picture before my eyes..thanks...hugs..Nessa.. :-) venkat |
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Re: misty morning
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by AnGeL_M on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 12:39:09 AM AEST
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This Is A Beautiful Nature Poem Very Enjoyable Read :-) Loved It !!!!!!
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
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Re: misty morning
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 02:34:05 AM AEST
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Wonderful poetry, a good imagery!
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: misty morning
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:57:57 AM AEST
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This is beautiful hun, I loved it...read it three times
Love 'n lotsa hugs
- Becca |
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Re: misty morning
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by JennyFruFru on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:34:55 PM AEST
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| what a pretty picture you created.... how lovely... :) :) :) im such a lover of animals... :) :) :) |
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:48:21 PM AEST
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Wonderful write and read.
Excellent talent you've showed.
Jeff |
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Re: misty morning
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 01:03:29 AM AEST
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Loving imagery, Nessa. So glad you are feeling up to writing again.
We just had snow in May.....covered all the pretty lilacs and took all the colors away!
This was stunningly beautiful
love you
consue |
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Re: misty morning
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by faithmairee on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 04:44:00 PM AEST
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Nessa-I loved everything about this poem...the flow of the writing and the delivery were absolutely awesome. U Go, Gurl!
Hugs-Faith |
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Re: misty morning
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 05:07:54 PM AEST
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Perfect imagery....great picture you have painted. I got lost in the moment....
Hugs
Jenni |
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by emystar on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 05:48:28 PM AEST
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A masterpeice of misty morning beauty.
Awesome.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: misty morning
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by TheNextRobertFrost on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 04:28:21 PM AEST
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I could just sit here and read that poem forever! that is a very good poem you wrote.
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by Soulless on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 07:11:24 PM AEST
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I cant describe how much I adore your poems. They take me to places I never dreamed of and I can see exactly what is happening as your magical words unfold. It opens up a story that is so loving.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: misty morning
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by Dawny on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 05:17:57 AM AEST
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Beautiful imagery Nessa. One day when I have a few hours spare, I'm going to read all your poems, they just keep getting better!!
Really liked this one ((hugs))
Love Dawny x |
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Re: misty morning
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by Archie on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 05:47:01 AM AEST
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| You show a great eye for nature in this poem. |
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Re: misty morning
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by Ethereal_Engine on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:17:10 AM AEST
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| Ah mist is good topic, the prettier and less foreboding version of fog lol. A very surreal sounding almost fantasy like poem. It makes me think of Ireland, Scotland or any of the Celtic Isles where you always see those really nice pictures of green grass, rocky mountians, and always looming fog. Just as a curiosity why does everybody always keep the subject as Re: whatever it struck me as a bit odd. Anyway thanks for reviewing Terra...I write review not comment because I like the idea of a review over a comment...it implies a more thoughout responce and/or criticism. |
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by SnowB on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:43:49 PM AEST
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What a beautiful picture you have painted with your words....simply lovely..
Lena |
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by WestCPunk on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 05:15:35 PM AEST
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Not to be mean but i don't really like it i mean there are writers on here who write better than that and get no attention!
Sorry ~Shelbi |
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by Angelic_Demon on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 05:26:17 PM AEST
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| Love it mom. :D You nailed where we live right on the head. |
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by earthman on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 09:55:58 PM AEST
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Ladyfawn, i believe you caught mother nature by the pen.
it was great reading this
i heard my own style of describing moments in nature, in this poem.
thoughtful touches thoughout misty morning
and not so heavy it became foggy mourning
(laughs) like more than a few of mine do. ; )
~earthman |
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Re: misty morning
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 24th August 2007 @ 11:23:50 PM AEST
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So beautiful a peice to read and savor, and carry in one's heart for ever and who know's
where else. Simply splendid . . .
((((Nessa))))
Ben |
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 17th February 2015 @ 08:26:54 AM AEST
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Beautiful!!! Enchanting imagery; what a treat to read.
Peaceful and smile-inducing.
~Scorp |
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