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World of Silence
Contributed by
shanarah
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Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 02:52:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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World of Silence
I owe nothing to this new silenced world.
Sprouting lands carry a sweet scent.
Patches are parched and brown,
soaking up mist from the marsh.
Sun struck giving a lovely perfection,
to intelligible mountain range,
Limp with amazement at these flawless grounds.
Imagination dreams,
through whispers of winds.
Birds flying in spring filled air,
sloping to their nests over wild sorrel.
This glorious spread holds eternal poise.
My curious wisdom haults with haze,
deep forests and acres of meadow.
In the midst of this creation,
a joyous tremor runs through my veins.
My heart fires out inspiration.
The moon's eye creeps over,
sun will rest.
Delicate breaths sigh,
longing return for the world of silence.
Copyright ©
shanarah
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2004-05-12 02:52:21]
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Re: World of Silence
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:39:10 AM AEST
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very good flow..nice imagery..nice poem
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Re: World of Silence
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 06:05:37 AM AEST
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there is some great imagery in this!
"The moon's eye creeps over,
sun will rest."
beautiful. great write, phil xxx |
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Re: World of Silence
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 07:06:34 AM AEST
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I have been waiting for your next post...and now, you've not only exceeded my expectations, you've completely obliterated them.
This brings forth so many different images, all of which leap into the imagination thanks to the elegant descriptions used. I am sincerely impressed.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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