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A story of love
Contributed by
babyboobooangel
on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 02:07:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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in the blink of an eye
love in life can die
the bond between 2 souls
fear never knows
love remains in this place
the heart is the full space
the time it takes to mend a heart
thousands more fall apart
love in life is falling
only two true hearts come calling
a sweet girl beautiful and kind
a boy with only the girl on his mind
the two hearts will change
the lost love it seems so strange
they're far apart
but this shows that the heart
the one that knows the true love
not even god above
can identify the bond between them
there love is greatest among men
she is a queen
she is his hope and dream
the light in the dark
nothing will break them apart
they wait for the day
when they have their way
in each other's arms
bathing in each other's charms
this life this love is one to learn
this life this love is the one to turn
to save the world when in need
to spread love with its seed
the world will blossom full of love
and the gods will smile from above
the angels will sing
ears will ring
the world will love again
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Re: A story of love
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by babyboobooangel on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 02:15:12 AM AEST
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thsi loe
this love*
sorry i never checked good enough |
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Re: A story of love
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:09:05 AM AEST
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| Absolutely beautiful poem. you have very lucid style...keep em coming on...venkat |
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Re: A story of love
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by babyboobooangel on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 07:51:56 AM AEST
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thank you very much im so happy to know there is other people tha think my poetry is good
people plz post more coments good or bad |
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Re: A story of love
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by Bright_White_Dove on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 07:17:51 PM AEST
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Absolutley beautiful sweetheart!!!
I love you
Your Evve |
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Re: A story of love
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by gary on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 07:13:40 AM AEST
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| This poem had alot of feeling in it and it was a good writing. It can be given more words and imagination I think I like it alot. |
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Re: A story of love
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by inoc on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 08:36:09 AM AEST
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I just read that you may or have left this sight
I hope you havn't
A great poem !!!
I love the style
if you leave or have left
just keep on writing somewhere...
cheers!
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