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dunno
Contributed by
light
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Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 01:37:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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By channels of coolness
The echos are calling
And down the dim gorges
I hear the creek falling
It live in the mountains
Where mosses and sledges
Touch with there beauty
The banks and the ledges
Through breaks of cheddar
And sycamore bowers
Struggles the light
Thats love to the flowers
And softer than slumber
And sweeter then singing
The note of the bell-birds
Are running and ringing...
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Re: dunno
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 01:52:38 AM AEST (User
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Very beautifull scenarry.
luv, huggs,
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Re: dunno
(User Rating: 1 ) by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:16:07 AM AEST (User
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wow! this rhymes so well. it has a great flow! beautiful poem *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: dunno
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spike on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 04:27:02 AM AEST (User
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Not sure about the title but absolutely love the poem. Beautiful imagery in a smooth-flowing, well-written piece.
Spike |
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