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Not A Victim Like You

Contributed by NirvanaLotus on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 11:17:10 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

A victim what?
A victim?
Go get *****....
I'll tell you what...
You call me a victim
Pour and broken
You say what happened is some sort of token
You call me a liar when i tell you the truth
You break down and cry when i win and you loose
*****
spin spin over under loop around
so my feet dont touch the ground...
*****
mommy mommy why did you look away
mommy mommy ***** you i'm gone anyway
i'm not a victim i told them you see
i wont let this happen ever again to me
you can lie there and cry
boo hoo hoo while i die
but i'm not letting him take my life
you may try to stop me its true
but i wont be another victim like you
*****
it happened to you when you were little
you choose to ignore because your security is so brittle
i wont be a victim i tell you
you say i am one already as if i never knew
but i'm in your face now mom
years have gone by i've sung the raven's song
i'm telling you now mom
i'm telling you now...
once i told
the power i did hold
so ***** you mom
i'm not a victim not a victim...
*****
keep telling myself mom...
keep telling you mom...
i'm not a victim...
i can't be....
or he will win.

Copyright © NirvanaLotus ... [ 2004-05-11 23:17:10]
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Re: Not A Victim Like You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:48:51 AM AEST
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Very intersting write.
luv, huggs,
emy

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