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Put Another layer on
Contributed by
NirvanaLotus
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Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 11:10:20 PM in AEST
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Come on,
put another layer on.
They cant see it,
they havent yet.
Put another layer on,
and your ok.
They wouldnt care either way.
Look in the mirror,
purple dont suit you.
Look in your eyes,
pray he dont shoot you.
Long sleeves today,
till those welts fade away.
Sorry teacher,
My wrist's sore today.
No nurse I'm ok.
Why keep fightin?
He'll do it either way.
Just let him play his game,
it'll end the same.
Come on,
put another layer on.
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Re: Put Another layer on
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 12:37:18 AM AEST
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This very sad but written well.
luv, huggs,
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Re: Put Another layer on
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by Spike on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:25:03 AM AEST
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Right to the heart of it. A different kind of surrendering - learned helplessness and fatalism combine with raw survival. The understating only serves to concentrate the power and pain of this composition.
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