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ORIGINAL - Licorice Tongue Boy

Contributed by NirvanaLotus on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 11:03:38 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

He tastes like liquor off the shelf.
Yager shots like licorish...
His soft and sweet licorish tongue...
I should have said something
I should have felt something else
but you see i'm not lying to myself.
he tasted like my past
and i should have made that kiss the last
but on him i didnt mind the taste
on him stopping the kiss was a stupid waste
Maybe it went to far
Maybe we should of stopped,
got dressed and started up the car
Maybe that would have been more right
but it didn't feel like that not tonight.
Tonight i wanted to be there in his arms
Tonight I felt far away from all the worlds harms.
Tonight i fell into his marvelous charms.
A thousand kisses rushed
The cold air tingling all of our flesh so bare
his teeth were familair to running over my neck
my lips knew the warmth of his
and our hands knew the paths as all other lover's that exist
So we laid there in the car,
He asked what I thought
Was it too far?
I only kissed him again and tasted the licorish on his tongue
And i couldnt think of it as wrong.
I never felt that way before
I never felt right to my very core
So we lay there in his car
and we knew it wasn't too far...
and i kisses him and i tasted his licorish tongue
and i couldnt imagine more fun
gray and green eyes
masked without lies
little wisps of brown hair
hanging here and there
my perfect prince
all i've dreamt of since
so shut up world
and give me my licorish tongued boy

Copyright © NirvanaLotus ... [ 2004-05-11 23:03:38]
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Re: ORIGINAL - Licorice Tongue Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 12:31:04 AM AEST
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Good work.
Very creative.
luv, huggs,
emy

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