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Do you wanna dance with me.
Contributed by
Archie
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Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 08:46:52 PM in AEST
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I am sitting at my table
watching you across the room
trying to put on my courage
because I wanna dance with you.
My heart is pounding hard within me
'cause I've never done this before
It's like someone keeps telling me
boy you better head on out the door
I am sitting at my table
watching you across the room
trying to put on my courage
'cause I wanna dance with you
I just want to get to know you
As I hear my favorite song
I hope that I am not intruding
Did you come here alone?
I am sitting at my table
watching you across the room
trying to put on my courage
'cause I wanna dance with you
At my job I have been slaving;
now the weekend's finally come
I don't want no complications
I just want to have some fun.
I am sitting at my table
watching you across the room
trying to get up my courage
'cause I wanna dance with you.
Copyright ©
Archie
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Re: Do you wanna dance with me.
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 08:58:53 PM AEST
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well done
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Re: Do you wanna dance with me.
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 09:00:21 PM AEST
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Beautifull write.
go for it.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Do you wanna dance with me.
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 09:10:55 PM AEST
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WOW!! I loved this... I was actually trying to sing as I read..lol... (the operative word being 'trying')
Jenni
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Re: Do you wanna dance with me.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 12:34:24 AM AEST
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Archie, this is so sweet. I can remember those times wishing boys would ask me to dance and thinking it was me. Maybe they were just too shy. Gosh, fun memories.
Rita |
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Re: Do you wanna dance with me.
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 02:41:02 PM AEST
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Aww! hehe, Archie, I hope that you got up the courage and asked her.... I'm sure she was sitting there trying to get the courage to ask you too!! Funny place, is Earth...
Jaime |
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Re: Do you wanna dance with me.
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by blossomingcherry5353 on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 03:51:22 PM AEST
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I liked that song, nice words, why not just go up to her and ask. It will never hurt to try, plus who know's what will happen.
Best to you,
Shannon~ |
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Re: Do you wanna dance with me.
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by crying_loneliness on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 03:55:01 PM AEST
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| Aww...it's so cute ^O^ You did a great job writing it. |
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Re: Do you wanna dance with me.
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by arden on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 02:09:36 PM AEST
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aww this was very sweet.
well done. i enjoyed it very much!
keep em coming.
Arden |
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Re: Do you wanna dance with me.
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 09:20:47 PM AEST
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Sweet-n-tantalizing.
Very good job.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Do you wanna dance with me.
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 07:48:48 PM AEST
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| Archie- How wonderful! I could picture you at the table there.... and then... finally, getting up to ask the girl. Lovely write! |
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Re: Do you wanna dance with me.
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 09:05:44 PM AEST
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archie, this is so well written and adorably sweet:) ahhh to be young at a dance again, sigh....... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Do you wanna dance with me.
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 06:12:15 PM AEST
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This was so sweet.... I loved it
jishes |
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Re: Do you wanna dance with me.
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by LoVeLy_4_StEvE on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 10:15:21 PM AEST
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Awwww very very very sweet.. I really enjoyed it.. It made me smile *^_^*
**Hugs**
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