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One Mistake
Contributed by
crying_loneliness
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Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 07:47:55 PM in AEST
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He took the gun out of his shelf
And put it to his head,
Then he sat himself upon
His long forgotten bed.
He pulled the little trigger,
And the bullet went straight in,
He had just committed
The most horrible sin.
The next day they found him,
Lying on the floor
They wished they'd treated him better
And dragged him out the door.
Family and friends were full of grief
And they began to cry
They wondered why this wonderful boy
Thought he deserved to die.
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2004-05-11 19:47:55]
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Re: One Mistake
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 09:03:07 PM AEST
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This was well written..I am sorry for your loss..and the way in which it happened...
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Re: One Mistake
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 09:07:12 PM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
I'm so sorry for your loss.
luv, huggs,
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Re: One Mistake
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by alwys2nv on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 11:13:04 AM AEST
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im sorry that your friend commited, i also had a friend, she was on the phone with me when she did it, any ways good write, if you ever need to talk you can talk to me w/e you want,
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