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I Worry
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 06:30:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Why do I sit here and fret?
When my attempts to talk you ignore?
You think this is funny, I bet,
Even though it's you I worry for.
Of suicide you always talk,
Then you just dissappear,
You don't to it to shock,
Yet, you'd hate me if I shed a tear.
Months you've been gone now,
Though I check your account everyday.
I'm trying to reach you somehow,
Trying to show you a way.
If you've killed yourself, that's fine,
But I wish you'd have told me why.
Than at least over here on the sidelines,
I would know if I should say good-bye.
~*~Jaime Moran~*~
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2004-05-11 18:30:25]
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Re: I Worry
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by liquidsunshine on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 06:40:35 PM AEST
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Its very thoughtful of you to worry and even more so to write such a lovely poem. Hopefully it's not what we think, eh?
Bravo and encore, for this write is one of compassion.
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Re: I Worry
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 06:56:05 PM AEST
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| There is nothing I can say to further encourage the writer of this poem except pray. |
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Re: I Worry
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 03:43:27 PM AEST
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It is so sad to lose a friend and not know why or where they are. Some of us worry if they are here and worry if they disappear. I guess some of us are just born worriers. I do hope your friends pops up unexpectedly and is ok and has their life straight.
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Re: I Worry
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 01:43:27 AM AEST
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Oh i'm so sorry.......is there anything worse than to lose a friend, and especially thinking maybe to suicide.......and then not being about to reach them.
You are so kind to be so concerned. I hope you reach them soon
love you
consue
wonderful speaking poem
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Re: I Worry
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by SweetRhythm on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 01:16:09 PM AEST
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Am very moved by your thoughful words, I hope your friend is ok. And what your going through is just a worry rather than something you will have to experience.
Stay strong & try not to let it drag you down. Keep the poems coming.
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Re: I Worry
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by SuicidalSon on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 08:12:12 AM AEST
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| Where is the Son? Hes back and He thanks you. |
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Re: I Worry
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:51:25 AM AEST
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Beautiful. I don't know what else to say, other than making myself sound like a hypocrite
Your sis
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