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Unwanted Truth
Contributed by
dirtyfool
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Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:45:03 PM in AEST
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UNWANTED TRUTH
I always thought it,
And wished it a lie,
I always said it,
Never ment it,
But I have seen
What your actions mean,
No one wants me here,
With every tear,
That crashes to the floor,
I'm heading for that escape door,
I want out of this torture,
I want to be free of this pain,
I wish someone would care,
Nobody's ever there,
When I'm falling down,
Nobody's picking me up,
So how can I keep holding on,
If I don't have a grip
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2004-05-11 17:45:03]
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Re: Unwanted Truth
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:46:53 PM AEST
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I have felt like this many many times... though I still haven't found that escape door...
Very good, and thanks for sharing...
Jaime |
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Re: Unwanted Truth
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by angel_facing_judgement on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:56:46 PM AEST
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| been there |
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Re: Unwanted Truth
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:58:02 PM AEST
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Here is a hand, grab it!! We all feel alone and desperate at times. Hope things improve for you soon.
Rita |
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Re: Unwanted Truth
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by valek on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 11:47:45 AM AEST
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i know exactly how you feel man. feeliing that way really freakin suck doesnt it? awesome poem by the way. i really enjoyed it
peace,
Valek |
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Re: Unwanted Truth
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by valek on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 11:48:00 AM AEST
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i know exactly how you feel man. feeling that way really freakin sucks doesnt it? awesome poem by the way. i really enjoyed it
peace,
Valek |
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Re: Unwanted Truth
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by movax on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 07:43:07 AM AEST
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| Good stuff. Keep it up |
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Re: Unwanted Truth
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by kidpoet_213 on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 09:17:31 PM AEST
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Yepperz!!!
Been there and done this too... hey... u'll get thru... takes time and patiences... just grab onto something or someone and hold on tight... but don't drown them too... work as a team to get thru this ruff time..
By the way awesome poem... keep writing... now there's something to grab on to...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Unwanted Truth
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by Rhei76 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 01:30:13 PM AEST
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| I thought it was a kick *** write. I felt my buzz kick in ti your words. Great poem. |
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