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Walking At Night
Contributed by
Overstated
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Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:34:38 PM in AEST
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Your lips are cherry red
Hold my hand as we walk on ahead
Skipping around dwellings, passing past streetlights
Is it me or does the moon look extra white
This grey castles’ been burnt and built back
But its still here back on track
As we sit over looking at the sea
You’re tired I can tell when you’re staring at me
Red eyed but so alive
We’re in our prime too young to die
But we’re so scared now
As we look to the cloud
You ask the first star something
Your lips hovering on your whispers
You smile; we leave to climb up the hill
To hug the streets and pull the moon just a little closer still
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Re: Walking At Night
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by angel_facing_judgement on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 06:09:32 PM AEST
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| this is really sweet |
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Re: Walking At Night
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by liquidsunshine on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 06:23:39 PM AEST
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Very pretty and sweet in every sense of the word. I love it. Bravo and encore.
Love,
Chelsea |
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Re: Walking At Night
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 08:15:53 PM AEST
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| well written. very nice. |
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Re: Walking At Night
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by PumpkinPie on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 08:18:53 PM AEST
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"To hug the streets and pull the moon just a little closer still",sealed with a kiss.I like your style,it's very different,very interesting to read.
PumpkinPie |
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Re: Walking At Night
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 06:15:10 AM AEST
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| it's a very beautiful poem! i love it when you aout her lips as "cherry red" it catured her and made me want to read more... great write! |
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