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The Waters or the Woods
Contributed by
Juliet
on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:12:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Forgive me,
I am trying to see into the dense forest,
and failing to notice the brook three feet ahead.
The mystery lures me into the woods,
while the simplistic and palpable waters are passed by.
I am now among tall trees that bear no leaves of blossoms,
and now notice that there is nothing there to be seen.
I am looking back behind me,
to the gently fading ripples of the peaceful mist,
and praying to God that I can reach it before
it disappears forever.
I am stumbling over the echo in my head that is conjuring up old opinions and beliefs,
and I've arrived at the last few drops in just enough time
to drink them up and keep them in my thirsting heart.
Copyright ©
Juliet
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2004-05-11 17:12:07]
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Re: The Waters or the Woods
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 01:01:02 AM AEST
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| very good poem..a scene of nature and the emotional feling of a poetic heart...venkat |
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Re: The Waters or the Woods
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by twinkletoes on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:42:39 PM AEST
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This has quality set within it's words. I like what you have done using the forest and stream etc. One often reads a city used same way. You are a talented poet. Welcome aboard.
tt |
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