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So very alone.
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:03:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The light goes out
She is left alone
Alone with her fears
Alone
With no one to hold her
But she needs a comfort from far beyond
From the lord on high
Wont someone help her
Find that comfort?
March 14th 2000
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Re: So very alone.
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by Overstated on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:20:38 PM AEST
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| glad you dont feel alone now - i like your work feels very honest |
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Re: So very alone.
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by loveisendless on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 10:10:36 PM AEST
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SHORT & SWEET BUT FROM A HEART THAT IS COMPLETE! NICE POEM!!
LOL-DAN!!! |
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Re: So very alone.
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 03:05:29 PM AEST
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CeCe...
It's too bad that you don't believe anymore because at times the only thing holding my belief together was yours... And though after moving I gave mine up, I never dreamed that you would. And I'm glad you are no longer alone... I hope that you are much happier now that you ever were in school....
Jaime |
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Re: So very alone.
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by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:08:57 PM AEST
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I liked this a lot, especially if I don't think about what was on your mind as you wrote it and don't think about christianity (no offense meant to any christians) but just about being alone and divinity in general . . . *smiles*
Well done.
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