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Nonfiction is Supposed to be True
Contributed by
Juliet
on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:00:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I look to my left, he's suddenly there.
I lean in for a kiss, and I find only air.
Now he's a young boy, denying my cares,
and I'm lost in the emptiest eyes.
The time has returned, it's no longer the past,
and I'm faced with the choice to be first or be last.
But I'm stuck with a wizard with a spell he can't cast,
and oh, how his un-feeling lies.
Copyright ©
Juliet
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2004-05-11 17:00:34]
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Re: Nonfiction is Supposed to be True
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 10:52:08 AM AEST
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"But I'm stuck with a wizard with a spell he can't cast,"
Great line.
I lost you on the last one, however.
You're pretty good at rhymes.
Will go check out some more of your work now. |
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Re: Nonfiction is Supposed to be True
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by twinkletoes on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:29:31 PM AEST
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I think this is a very well written piece of r&r poetry. I enjoy it very much.
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Re: Nonfiction is Supposed to be True
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by HellsLibrarian on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 12:30:15 AM AEST
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| I'm not sure I understand the whole theme yet, but the rhyme thing did work quite well. |
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