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Bleed
Contributed by
reilt
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Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:48:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Count the ways to bleed.
Scratching surfaces,
Remaining raw,
I am still a twin of grief.
Flesh refused of healing,
Afraid to ask that favour,
A sorry skin weeps
Into a darkness,
Unheard,
But for the times,
Infinite,
It will bleed again.
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-05-11 16:48:57]
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Re: Bleed
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:52:30 PM AEST
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| wow! powerful! great write! |
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Re: Bleed
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by blackmarker on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:52:43 PM AEST
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| oh my gosh.. thats so.. amazing. raw and emotional, such truth.. I'm amazed, and saddened.. cutting isn't really my thing, but, somehow you managed to almost make it seem.. beautiful.. if you know how I mean. |
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Re: Bleed
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:59:31 PM AEST
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| Growth and change always take time |
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