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The Lost Painting
Contributed by
Juliet
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Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:45:43 PM in AEST
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The shadow of the Tree passes through the blinds
and paints itself on the wall
for my enjoyment
And for a moment my heart
stops in my chest
and it feels so good to die for a second
For the Sun rarely comes out for one to see this subtle radiance,
and when it does,
there are too many people blocking the window
Copyright ©
Juliet
... [
2004-05-11 16:45:43]
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Re: The Lost Painting
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by blackmarker on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:49:23 PM AEST
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| Wow. well done, I love it! nice imagery. wonderful. |
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Re: The Lost Painting
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:50:37 PM AEST
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| Wonderful poem...great use of imagery. I really loved it |
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Re: The Lost Painting
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:02:02 PM AEST
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| This is a very awesome poem, their is a lot of depth to it. |
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