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Only until the rain stops
Contributed by
DaveHugs
on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:01:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A feeling
Of heavy eyes
Is nudging
As I sit by
The glowing logs
This cold night
That not-alone
Feeling
Turns my head
To the door
That creaks
And slowly
The hinges squeak
And ache
I bolt upright
And admit
To being curious
And scared
And calmed
In the instant
The cold and damp
Frail fur paw
pats the door
And my heart
Copyright ©
DaveHugs
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2004-05-11 16:01:52]
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Re: Only until the rain stops
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:13:19 PM AEST
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| Great job! |
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Re: Only until the rain stops
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by angel_facing_judgement on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:26:11 PM AEST
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| this was truly sweet |
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Re: Only until the rain stops
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by liquidsunshine on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 06:30:13 PM AEST
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aww, cute!
Bravo and encore
love,
chelsea |
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Re: Only until the rain stops
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by SugimotoYouki on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 07:46:39 AM AEST
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sweet, almost innocent thoughts
wrapped in thoughtful, almost slighty sad hints of words...
good work...
keep it flowing... |
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