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The man from above
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 03:57:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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When a man came to earth
He loved everything that had birth
Thousands of years ago a man loved
Why don’t we love like the man from above?
May 11 1999
Copyright ©
lil_angel
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2004-05-11 15:57:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The man from above
(User Rating: 1 ) by Overstated on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:08:17 PM AEST (User
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Good work nice and simple yet with a real message behind it- strange to think you wrote that 5 years ago... |
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Re: The man from above
(User Rating: 1 ) by Putteragain on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:49:51 PM AEST (User
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it is still true love this one short and sweet
:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) |
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Re: The man from above
(User Rating: 1 ) by Zaf_Stud on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:51:17 PM AEST (User
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You've brought THE MAN back to life reminding the other men of him. Bless you ...
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Re: The man from above
(User Rating: 1 ) by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:15:12 PM AEST (User
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Well, not what you might call my kind of poem (no offense, hon, but then I guess you know how I am) but not bad ^^.
--Nora |
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